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Pitch Black Sun

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Pitch Black Sun

It was a dark ebony night. The only thing you could see were the massive lights of lightning.

Everything was very quiet except the when the loud crash of thunder would hit the earth. It was all beautiful and ugly at the same time. The splash of the rain leaves the dirt slushy and your skin chilly.

The lightning aluminates the depressed darkness. All you can think of is the growl of thunder craving your fear. Time crawls by like a baby snail, racing for revenge.

Your heartbeats get louder and it seems like so does the snarl of thunder. Darkness surrounds you and you have no way out. Then everything becomes motionless and out of the dark indigo sky, shines a light sandy color.

Your eyes follow the light up into the sky but see nothing but darkness. The ivory lightning is gone and so is the thunder except for a whisper every now and then. You look up once more towards the sky and in your mind you see, the Pitch Black Sun.
A small prose poem that I put together during a really bad thunderstorm to help pass the time.
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Kimiko-Otaku's avatar
Wow, I really like this! Sorry that I'm just now seeing your posts. I haven't been on for a while. (in ages!!) ^^;